{"id":1266,"date":"2019-03-05T10:26:16","date_gmt":"2019-03-05T15:26:16","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/?p=1266"},"modified":"2019-03-05T10:26:16","modified_gmt":"2019-03-05T15:26:16","slug":"infinite-iterations","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/infinite-iterations\/","title":{"rendered":"Infinite Iterations"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>[vc_row][vc_column][vc_column_text]My husband hears draft and thinks beer. I hear draft and think breeze. We\u2019re both writers, but when it comes to producing drafts (not beer or breezes but the scribbling kind) we are as different as two writers can be. Ask him how many drafts it takes to write a book, and he\u2019s likely to say, \u201cSix or eight.\u201d I\u2019ve never racked up fewer than fifteen. I thought my new book would be different, but here I am at ten, and my agent has just spoken those dreaded words: \u201cIt\u2019s not ready yet.\u201d<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><b>What is a draft anyway?<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/IMG_0512-1-e1551797169410.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-medium wp-image-1280\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/IMG_0512-1-e1551797169410-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/IMG_0512-1-e1551797169410-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/IMG_0512-1-e1551797169410-768x1024.jpg 768w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/IMG_0512-1-e1551797169410-600x800.jpg 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a>Before computers, drafts were easy to define. I&#8217;d type a manuscript, work it over with a blue, red, or lead pencil, or maybe a fountain pen (unwise, given the flood in my future). When the pages could no longer be read for all the cross-outs and add-ins, when the cut-and-paste became more a maze than orderly signposts of change, I&#8217;d retype the manuscript and presto! a new draft.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Now when I ask my husband what draft he\u2019s on with the new novel, he looks puzzled. \u201cHard to say. Five? I keep changing things between print-outs.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><b>Puke, Shit, and the Kitchen Sink<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">I don&#8217;t count my first draft in my numbering. This is the lay-down draft. The puke draft, as my husband likes to say. What Calvin Trillin calls his vomit draft. Others call it the kitchen-sink draft because everything goes in. John McPhee compares it to flinging mud at the wall.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway.jpeg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-1277 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway-300x215.jpeg\" alt=\"\" width=\"260\" height=\"186\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway-300x215.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway-768x550.jpeg 768w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway-1024x733.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway-600x430.jpeg 600w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Hemingway.jpeg 1084w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 260px) 100vw, 260px\" \/><\/a>Or as Hemingway famously and concisely put it, <\/span>\u201c<span class=\"s1\">The first draft of anything is shit.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">I like to think of this first foray as my donn\u00e9 draft. A gift. <span class=\"s1\">Everything that comes into my mind goes onto the page: thoughts, scenes, snippets of dialogue, flashes of description. I write my donn\u00e9 draft longhand, the movement of my arm a gleaner\u2019s gathering from my subconscious. I write only on the right-hand side of the page, flipping back to jot quick notes on the left side. <em>Ra\u00fal should appear here. Get Amanda to Chiapas before now. <\/em><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">The donn\u00e9 draft is never complete. It rarely has a beginning, middle, or end. But the main characters are<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0born<\/span>\u00a0and the outer boundaries of this world staked out, even if I don&#8217;t know yet exactly how I\u2019ll lead the reader through.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><b>The Affirmation Draft<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-medium wp-image-1279\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184-224x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"224\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184-224x300.jpg 224w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184-768x1028.jpg 768w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184-765x1024.jpg 765w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184-600x803.jpg 600w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016-09-25-07.13.15-e1551797043184.jpg 1936w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 224px) 100vw, 224px\" \/><\/a>The first draft is the one that tells me this may indeed<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0be\u00a0<\/span>a book. By the time I finish the affirmation draft, the story has a beginning, middle, and end, although not necessarily in that order. I know my protagonist the way I know a good friend or a bad enemy: I know what she wants and what she needs and what sparks fly between the two. The possibilities send a shiver of delight across my skin, a flash of power that must be what the gods felt at the end of the first day.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">As an antidote, I turn to Bernard <span class=\"s1\">Malamud&#8217;s words to a graduating class at Bennington College: \u201cThe first draft of anything is suspect unless one is a genius.\u201d <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\">I&#8217;ve been at this way too long to think I&#8217;m a prodigy.\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>The Magpie Draft<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-5.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-1268 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-5.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"163\" height=\"163\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-5.jpg 225w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-5-150x150.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 163px) 100vw, 163px\" \/><\/a>I call my second draft my magpie draft, as the manuscript plumps with all the shiny bits I find.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\"> I research in books and on the Internet. I scrabble about in my memory. I walk the streets, picking up a gesture here, a swatch of wall there.\u00a0<\/span><span class=\"s1\">Often I have no idea how a piece might fit but I shove it in anyway. I tell myself I can always jerk it out.<\/span><\/p>\n<p><span class=\"s1\">I give myself up to the process, which feels incoherent and dangerous, but exhilarates me.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\"><span class=\"s1\"><b>Campdrafting<\/b><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\"> <a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-1-2.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright size-full wp-image-1270\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-1-2.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-1-2.jpg 225w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-1-2-150x150.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a>Australians have devised a sport called campdrafting, in which a person on horseback has to cut a steer from the herd and block and turn the animal several times to prove they are in control.<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\">Writers play a similar game, variously called \u201cRearranging the Furniture\u201d and \u201cKilling your Darlings.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\"><span class=\"s1\">The drafts that follow the Affirmation and the Magpie are messy. They require great focus and ruthlessness, and more than a few long dark nights of the soul. The work is sometimes boring, often discouraging, and different for every writer. But neither experience nor reputation gives a writer a pass on multiple drafts. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">\u201c<span class=\"s1\">Revision is the constant creation of afterthoughts,\u201d <\/span>Malamud said. \u201c<span class=\"s1\">One learns the best way to milk one\u2019s mind.\u201d<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">Laboriously, I pull bits out, tighten things up. Maybe the story doesn\u2019t need that ragged swatch of red: maybe a scarlet thread will do.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">Thrashing about in the desert of these middle drafts, I lose faith. I worry that I lack what it takes to pull this story together. It&#8217;s too big for my puny skills, too complex. I\u2019m not the right god to create this world.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p7\"><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-1274 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"305\" height=\"203\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7-300x200.jpg 300w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7-768x512.jpg 768w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/image-7-600x400.jpg 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 305px) 100vw, 305px\" \/><\/a>I take comfort from others who have wandered this writerly wilderness before me. <\/span><span class=\"s3\">Hemingway, by his own count, rewrote <em>A Farewell to Arms <\/em>at least fifty times. In <\/span><span class=\"s1\"><em>Speak, Memory<\/em><i>, <\/i>Vladimir Nabokov admitted, \u201cI have rewritten \u2014 often several times \u2014 every word I have ever published. My pencils outlast their erasers.\u201d Dorothy Parker once said in an interview in <em>The Paris Review<\/em>: &#8220;<\/span><span class=\"s1\">I can\u2019t write five words but that I can change seven.\u201d\u00a0<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p9\"><span class=\"s1\"> \u201cPut down everything that comes into your head and you\u2019re a writer,\u201d Colette wrote in <em>Casual Chance<\/em>. \u201dBut an author is one who can judge his own stuff\u2019s worth, without pity, and destroy most of it.\u201d <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\"><b>The Ah-ha! Draft<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-1271 alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/tumblr_mheoaghob01qced37o1_500-234x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"247\" height=\"317\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/tumblr_mheoaghob01qced37o1_500-234x300.jpg 234w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/tumblr_mheoaghob01qced37o1_500.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 247px) 100vw, 247px\" \/>Then suddenly, ruthlessly, doggedly, a draft comes along that doesn\u2019t<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0<\/span>seem so bad. In fact, it\u2019s pretty good. Damn good! I dance to the rhythm of the words, the harmonies that weave and cascade and soar to a crescendo. I fall in love again.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">Yes, the scaffolding still has to be removed: all those dialogue tags and characters descriptors and narrative directions that helped me find my way through the story, but which a reader doesn\u2019t need at all.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">By now my book-world is fully formed and well-populated. I\u2019ve structured a clear path to lead the reader from first page to last. All that\u2019s left is to free the path of impediments. With the dedication of a Japanese gardener, I rake away the boulders of over-description, the rocks of clich\u00e9 and jargon, and infelicitous phrases. With each raking, I expose a new crop of obstacles, but smaller ones, easily removed, until the path is a smooth white swath in the moonlight.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">Oh, how I strain for metaphors to describe this painful business, this drudgery that writing becomes, the uncertainty of it, the mysterious desire and dread that push and pull me through these endless draft.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">\u201cThere is no god,\u201d says Cormac McCarthy, \u201cand we are its prophets.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\"><b>Finally<\/b><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">I think this book is done. The characters move through their world with authenticity: yes! The story unfolds in an inevitably yet surprising way: yes!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">I label this final iteration Agent\u2019s Draft. Or Editor&#8217;s Draft. Or perhaps Reader\u2019s Draft. I nudge my featherless chick from the nest.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p10\"><span class=\"s2\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson.jpeg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\" wp-image-1276 alignleft\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson-300x235.jpeg\" alt=\"\" width=\"334\" height=\"262\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson-300x235.jpeg 300w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson-768x602.jpeg 768w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson-1024x803.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson-600x471.jpeg 600w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/Samuel-Johnson.jpeg 1234w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 334px) 100vw, 334px\" \/><\/a>I cross my fingers that a note won&#8217;t come back like the one Samuel Johnson sent to a hapless writer: \u201c<\/span><span class=\"s1\">Your manuscript is both good and original; but the part that is good is not original, and the part that is original is not good.&#8221;<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p10\"><span class=\"s2\">Like James Herriot, <\/span><span class=\"s1\">I have become a &#8220;connoisseur of that nasty thud a manuscript makes when it comes through the letter box&#8221;\u2014no less nasty when the thud I hear is digital.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0<\/span><\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p12\">I lash about, looking for something to blame. I\u2019m too young. Too old. The wrong gender. The wrong colour. I live in the wrong place. My writing is too sophisticated. Too experimental. Too. Too. Too.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p13\"><span class=\"s2\"> <a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/article-0-01924FA0000004B0-577_468x6241.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"wp-image-1275 alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/article-0-01924FA0000004B0-577_468x6241-225x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"154\" height=\"205\" srcset=\"https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/article-0-01924FA0000004B0-577_468x6241-225x300.jpg 225w, https:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/article-0-01924FA0000004B0-577_468x6241.jpg 468w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 154px) 100vw, 154px\" \/><\/a>Hopeless outrage crashes over me in waves that diminish<\/span>\u00a0slowly<span class=\"s2\">, birthing contractions in reverse. In the spaces between, I try to convince myself that the rejected draft is just fine. After all, wasn\u2019t <\/span><span class=\"s1\">J. K. Rowling&#8217;s first <em>Harry Potter <\/em>manuscript rejected 12 times? Wasn\u2019t Stephen King&#8217;s <em>Carrie <\/em>was rejected 30 times. Wasn\u2019t <em>Gone With The Wind <\/em>sent back a whopping 38 times? Even my own <em>Convict Lover <\/em>was rejected by dozens of publishers before it found a home; <em>Refuge<\/em>, too. <\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p13\"><span class=\"s1\">Should I courageously defend this \u201cfinal draft\u201d? Or am I foolishly clinging to a flawed version of what this book could be?<\/span><\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">The work is too hard. Too uncertain. \u201cI want to quit,\u201d I say to my husband. \u201cQuit then,\u201d he says, knowing I won\u2019t, but\u00a0 knowing too that I need to know that I can. We do this for each other.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">In days, or weeks, or months, the despair softens until I think I hear the manuscript calling. <em>Maybe a different point of view? A shift to the present tense? A new path through the story?<\/em> Eventually, I listen.<span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0One possibility seems intriguing.\u00a0<\/span>I open the file, press duplicate, and give the file a new start-date, a new draft number.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p5\">And this, I believe, is what makes a writer. Not overweaning talent or luck or connections, but this stubborn willingness to start another draft\u2014however that word is defined\u2014and another and yet another until the work is well and truly done.<\/p>\n<p>[\/vc_column_text][\/vc_column][\/vc_row][vc_row][vc_column][vc_separator][vc_column_text css=&#8221;.vc_custom_1477364431886{padding-top: 10px !important;padding-right: 10px !important;padding-bottom: 10px !important;padding-left: 10px !important;background-color: #ededed !important;background-position: center !important;background-repeat: no-repeat !important;background-size: cover !important;border-radius: 2px !important;}&#8221;]<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: center;\">My record is 20 drafts (not counting this post). What&#8217;s yours?<\/h3>\n<p>[\/vc_column_text][vc_separator][\/vc_column][\/vc_row]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>[vc_row][vc_column][vc_column_text]My husband hears draft and thinks beer. I hear draft and think breeze. 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