{"id":1067,"date":"2018-03-17T19:35:47","date_gmt":"2018-03-17T23:35:47","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/?p=1067"},"modified":"2018-03-17T19:35:47","modified_gmt":"2018-03-17T23:35:47","slug":"the-cutting-edge","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/the-cutting-edge\/","title":{"rendered":"The Cutting Edge"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>[vc_row][vc_column][vc_column_text] After seven years of researching and writing, I finally printed out a draft of my nonfiction novel <em>The Convict Lover.<\/em> The stack of pages was higher than a child\u2019s booster seat. Even in my innocence, I knew prospective publishers were unlikely to read a 750-page prison tome, so I hauled out my scissors and glue pot\u2014this was 1994, the digital dark ages\u2014and attacked my hard-won words. Six months later, the manuscript was lean and muscular, reduced to a mere 88,000 words from its original 200,000. My heart, along with countless, priceless scenes, lay in shards on the floor.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1071\" style=\"width: 203px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/d45c67a16ef7425070bcf351f9662c3f.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1071\" class=\" wp-image-1071\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/d45c67a16ef7425070bcf351f9662c3f-235x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"193\" height=\"246\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/d45c67a16ef7425070bcf351f9662c3f-235x300.jpg 235w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/d45c67a16ef7425070bcf351f9662c3f.jpg 500w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 193px) 100vw, 193px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1071\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">A page of Nabokov text.<\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p1\">We still call it \u201ccut\u201d and \u201cpaste,\u201d even though editing is now accomplished with the click of a couple of keyboard keys, thanks to Larry Tesler, an engineer at Xerox in the 70s. Hours spent putting in a comma and taking it out\u2014Oscar Wilde\u2019s explication of his writing day\u2014requires no retyping, no White-out, no red lines scored through the text, no special editing scissors with blades long enough to cut across an 8\u00bd&#8221;-wide page.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">In a quaint quote, Vladimir Nabokov admitted that \u201cI have rewritten\u2014often several times\u2014every word I have ever published. My pencils outlast their erasers.\u201d Gone are the pencils, and the erasers, too.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><b>Genius Editors<\/b><\/h3>\n<div id=\"attachment_1077\" style=\"width: 249px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/250px-Maxwell_Perkins_NYWTS.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1077\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-1077\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/250px-Maxwell_Perkins_NYWTS-239x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"239\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/250px-Maxwell_Perkins_NYWTS-239x300.jpg 239w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/250px-Maxwell_Perkins_NYWTS.jpg 250w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 239px) 100vw, 239px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1077\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Maxwell Perkins, Editor<\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p1\">I cut my writer\u2019s teeth on the Max Perkins mythology, immortalized in the movie <em>Genius,<\/em> that behind every successful writer stands a savvy, eagle-eyed editor. I dreamed of being taken on by such an editor, who would slash and burn my wagon-load of pages into a brilliant novel, as Perkins did with Thomas Wolfe\u2019s <em>Look Homeward Angel,<\/em> ejecting 90,000 superfluous words from the story.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">I soon learned that, historically, editors have been a mixed blessing. Thomas Wentworth Higginson was a friend and literary advisor to Emily Dickinson, but after her death, when he edited her poems for publication, he removed much of the radically original punctuation we love.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1072\" style=\"width: 209px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-3.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1072\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1072\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-3.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"199\" height=\"254\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1072\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Gordon Lish&#8217;s edit of Raymond Carver&#8217;s text<\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p1\">More recently,<a href=\"https:\/\/www.newyorker.com\/magazine\/2007\/12\/24\/rough-crossings\"> Gordon Lish gutted Raymond Carver\u2019s stories<\/a><i>,<\/i> often reducing the text by more than half and making his own additions. Carver described Lish\u2019s edits as \u201csurgical amputation and transplant that might make them someway fit into the carton so the lid will close.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Never a fan of Carver\u2019s minimalism, I finally fell in love with his prose when <a href=\"https:\/\/www.newyorker.com\/magazine\/2007\/12\/24\/beginnershttps:\/\/www.newyorker.com\/magazine\/2007\/12\/24\/beginners\"><i>The New Yorker<\/i> <\/a>published his original version of the story that became \u201cWhat We Talk About When We Talk About Love.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Even knowing the backroom shenanigans some editors got up to, it was a shock to discover that Edward Bulwer-Lytton, Charles Dickens\u2019 editor, declared the original ending of <em>Great Expectations<\/em> too sad. Pip and Estella should end up together, he said, and that\u2019s the story generations of readers have read.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p1\"><b>Editable<\/b><\/h3>\n<p class=\"p1\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-2-1.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"size-full wp-image-1076 alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-2-1.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"225\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-2-1.jpg 225w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/images-2-1-150x150.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 225px) 100vw, 225px\" \/><\/a>I had the good fortune of being edited by Ellen Seligman, editor to Margaret Atwood, Elizabeth Hay, Michael Ondaatje, Jane Urquhart, David Adams Richards, Anne Michaels, and dozens more. Before she took me on, she invited me to lunch. Midway through our meal she leaned across the table. \u201cAre you editable?\u201d she said. I had no idea what she meant. Yes! I said.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">And so, when she suggested that in my novel <em>The Holding<\/em>, the two protagonists must meet at the end and have it out, I argued weakly, \u201cBut that\u2019s not in their characters,\u201d then went back to my desk and wrote the confrontation scene.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u201cThat doesn\u2019t work,\u201d Ellen said.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u201cHow about this?\u201d I emailed back, attaching the ending from the novel&#8217;s first draft.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">\u201cPerfect!\u201d she said.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">Michael Pietsch, who was David Foster Wallace\u2019s editor, captures the interplay that made working with Ellen so invigorating. \u201cEditing with a writer is a joyous collaboration\u2014not even a collaboration, but a conversation, a colloquy, a back-and-forth.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p1\">The best editors, I\u2019ve come to realize, are not Lish-like Svengalis, but smart, articulate ur-readers who, if the chemistry is right, will engage a writer in the deepest conversations of her literary life.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p3\"><b>Kill Your Darlings<\/b><\/h3>\n<p class=\"p3\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/kill-your-darlings.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-full wp-image-1079\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/kill-your-darlings.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/kill-your-darlings.jpg 300w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/kill-your-darlings-150x150.jpg 150w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a>Long before a manuscript is assigned to an editor, however, a writer must grow her own second set of eyes.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">It\u2019s not easy to follow the classic advice to kill your darlings, but writers learn to be ruthless. And when they do, the satisfactions are sweet.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">During his time in Germany, Nathan Englander wrote 200 pages of a new novel. Other projects took over, but eventually, he pulled out those 200 pages and spent a few weeks working on them. \u201cI threw them all out today,\u201d he said finally. \u201cAnd I\u2019m feeling light as a feather.\u201d<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">A typical editing day is a high drama of tragedy and triumph, with a voiceover dubbed by your best editor. Here is what a random day from last August looks like, during the final edit of\u00a0<em>Refuge<\/em>, to be published this fall:<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">1. Changed the name of one of the main characters from Juan Carlos to Carlos.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">2. Finally cut the St. Lawrence Seaway scene, which my editor has been insisting for months must go.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">3. Inserted a key phrase into the first page, otherwise unchanged since I wrote it in 2004.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">4. Changed the verb tense in the last section from past to present to signal a change in the character\u2019s mindset.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">5. Changed the verb tense in the last section from present to past to make it more readable.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1088\" style=\"width: 234px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/15167566_10209644531168386_7435596108841013841_o-1-e1521329551323.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1088\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-1088\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/15167566_10209644531168386_7435596108841013841_o-1-224x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"224\" height=\"300\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1088\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">A page from my own manuscript, last draft<\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p3\">6. Changed the verb tense back to present, readers be damned!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">7. Okay, okay, changed the verb tense back to past.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">8. Added more detail about <em>Necrophorus americanus<\/em><\/p>\n<p>9. Deep-sixed several descriptions Ellen would call &#8220;overly generous.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">10. Consulted with Burmese-speaking Beta Reader.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">11. Rewrote dialogue of Burmese character.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">12. Note for tomorrow: develop character of Don Arturo, who seems to have crept from the margins to the centre of the story.<\/p>\n<p>13. Changed verb tense back to present. Love it!<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p3\"><b>Umpteenth Revision <\/b><\/h3>\n<div id=\"attachment_1068\" style=\"width: 196px\" class=\"wp-caption alignleft\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/pins-austen.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1068\" class=\" wp-image-1068\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/pins-austen-300x200.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"186\" height=\"124\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/pins-austen-300x200.jpg 300w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/pins-austen.jpg 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 186px) 100vw, 186px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1068\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">Jane Austen&#8217;s Editing Pins<\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p3\">Jane Austen made her edits with <a href=\"http:\/\/www.openculture.com\/2018\/02\/jane-austen-used-pins-to-edit-her-manuscripts-before-the-word-processor-white-out.html\">straight pins<\/a>, crossing out unwanted text with brown iron-gall ink and pinning into those spots small pieces of paper written closely with new sentences. This was not an original idea: archivists at the Bodleian library have traced pins as an editing tool back to 1617.<\/p>\n<div id=\"attachment_1070\" style=\"width: 310px\" class=\"wp-caption alignright\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr.gif\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" aria-describedby=\"caption-attachment-1070\" class=\"size-medium wp-image-1070\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr-300x215.gif\" alt=\"\" width=\"300\" height=\"215\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr-300x215.gif 300w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr-768x549.gif 768w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr-1024x732.gif 1024w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/op-notebook-jkr-600x429.gif 600w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><p id=\"caption-attachment-1070\" class=\"wp-caption-text\">JK Rowling&#8217;s &#8220;plan&#8221; for <em>The Order of the Phoenix<\/em><\/p><\/div>\n<p class=\"p3\">JK Rowling mapped out her Harry Potter books in detail before she started writing, revising the plan until it was too scribbled over to make sense, then she\u2019d start fresh\u2014again and again, through umpteen revisions.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">I loved the physicality of the scissors, rubber cement, and paper-clipped insertions of my first book edits. I was less enamoured with digital cut-and-paste, fearful of what might be lost as I revised my prose over and over again. My fear dissolved when I discovered Scrivener, a word processing application that allows me to snap pictures of the text I am about to edit, preserving it in case the revision turns out to be worse than the original.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">Even so, I still print every one of my fifteen or so drafts, scribble over them in black, then blue, then red ink before inputting the changes. As I ease towards the final draft, I print on pink, then green, then blue paper in an effort to trick my eyes into seeing what is actually on the page. Finally, I read the last draft out loud, sometimes recording it, hoping my ear will pick up the last errors and infelicitous phrases my eyes have missed.<\/p>\n<h3 class=\"p3\"><b>Stop!<\/b><\/h3>\n<p class=\"p3\"><a href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1.jpg\" rel=\"wpdevart_lightbox\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignleft size-medium wp-image-1074\" src=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1-194x300.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"194\" height=\"300\" srcset=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1-194x300.jpg 194w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1-768x1187.jpg 768w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1-663x1024.jpg 663w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1-600x927.jpg 600w, http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/wp-content\/uploads\/book-cover-new-Convict-Lover-Final-RGB-1.jpg 1650w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 194px) 100vw, 194px\" \/><\/a>There\u2019s a saying that a book is never finished, it&#8217;s just whisked out of a writer&#8217;s hands by an editor who yells, Stop!<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">Last summer, while I was editing <em>Refuge<\/em>, I was also reviewing the text of a new edition of <em><a href=\"https:\/\/ecwpress.com\/products\/convict-lover\">The Convict Lover<\/a><\/em>, released just last week.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">It was a painful read. Almost 30 years had passed since I wrote that book: I wanted to crawl back inside every sentence and make it better. I soon realized that if I let myself change even one word, I\u2019d be revising the entire text. After all, I am not the same person I was then: I would tell the story differently now.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">Thank goodness, I was saved by my inner editor.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p3\">Stop! I whispered to myself, and left well enough alone.<\/p>\n<p class=\"p2\"><span class=\"Apple-converted-space\">\u00a0\u00a0<\/span>[\/vc_column_text][\/vc_column][\/vc_row][vc_row][vc_column][vc_separator][vc_column_text css=&#8221;.vc_custom_1477364431886{padding-top: 10px !important;padding-right: 10px !important;padding-bottom: 10px !important;padding-left: 10px !important;background-color: #ededed !important;background-position: center !important;background-repeat: no-repeat !important;background-size: cover !important;border-radius: 2px !important;}&#8221;]<\/p>\n<h3 style=\"text-align: center;\">Do you have a happy\/sad\/cutting edge editing story to share?<\/h3>\n<p>[\/vc_column_text][vc_separator][\/vc_column][\/vc_row]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>[vc_row][vc_column][vc_column_text] After seven years of researching and writing, I finally printed out a draft of my nonfiction novel The Convict Lover. The stack of pages was higher than a child\u2019s booster seat. Even in my innocence, I knew prospective publishers were unlikely to read a 750-page prison tome, so I hauled out my scissors and [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":2,"featured_media":1083,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[170,11],"tags":[91,203,206,209,205,207,208,204,210,131,211],"class_list":["post-1067","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-book-creation","category-digital-divide","tag-charles-dickens","tag-editing","tag-ellen-seligman","tag-emily-dickson","tag-gordon-lish","tag-jane-austen","tag-jk-rowling","tag-max-perkins","tag-refuge","tag-the-convict-lover","tag-the-holding","invicta_simple_style_entry"],"yoast_head":"<!-- This site is optimized with the Yoast SEO plugin v27.6 - https:\/\/yoast.com\/product\/yoast-seo-wordpress\/ -->\n<title>The Cutting Edge - Books UnPacked Blog<\/title>\n<meta name=\"robots\" content=\"index, follow, max-snippet:-1, max-image-preview:large, max-video-preview:-1\" \/>\n<link rel=\"canonical\" href=\"http:\/\/merilynsimonds.com\/books-unpacked-blog\/the-cutting-edge\/\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:locale\" content=\"en_US\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:type\" content=\"article\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:title\" content=\"The Cutting Edge - Books UnPacked Blog\" \/>\n<meta property=\"og:description\" content=\"[vc_row][vc_column][vc_column_text] After seven years of researching and writing, I finally printed out a draft of my nonfiction novel The Convict Lover. 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